南風- Minami Kaze- South Wind

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This is the translation I have so far of the new Full Metal Panic! Series OP Song. This has taken me quite a while, and I want to know if anyone can "proof read" if of sorts. My Japanese WP won't let me paste directly into LJ, stupid fing language won't read, only shows crap, but I CAN Take a screen shot of it, cus I'm a ninja like that, so here it is! The Kanji was taken directly from Mikuni Shimokawa's CD insert for the single. Used the Edict dictionary for most of the translation. I am mainly trying to see if what I have so far is an acurate translation, since it seems way off from the karaoke translation in the opening sequence, but this all seems more logical considering the meanings of the kanji and such. Anyway, for anyone versed in Japanese, please give me some advice (THIS MEANS YOU RICHARD!!! XD)